Monday, October 22, 2007

"baykus" (etymology: J Renee)

For my uncle's 60th, we are supposed to bring him sixty of something. So lately, I have been busy writing 60 haikus to bring. He now lives at the bay house once built by my grandfather. It is the stuff of family legends. Here are some of my memories there encased in haikus:

Bird or Indian
Branch of imagination
Is driftwood

Squeezing through my toes
Oozes the brown mushy mud
Full of squish

Beachwater-Baylight
Castle of Young Patriarchs
Ruled by Bills

Think of Mobile Bay
When you feel so far away
Then it’s near

The fiery orb
Drowns in the night’s warm waters
Ah…sunset

Swat smack go for blood!
Kill that little sucker quick!
Yellowflies

Man shall not live by
Land alone, for he shall live
By the sea

Put on the armor
The battle is not against
Flesh but fish

Put on the armor
Your old Tennis shoes and gig
Flounder waits

Try not to scare them
Step lightly or slide your feet
Gig em quick

I wade out in peace
In the bay and the silence
Lost in thought

Pelican preachers
Have church on the old posts with
Their big mouths

4 comments:

s. wells said...

beautiful!

i like:

Man shall not live by,
Land alone, for he shall live
By the sea


i have had the feeling recently that i've lived too long by the land.

Anonymous said...

Fabulous! I want my own copy of the collection - you are so inspiring and I am soaking it in.
Love you much.
Holly

b. wallace said...

Holly, Jen wrote one about 3 day holes last night!!!! :) I need to put one in there about jellybubbles as well.

IrelandRomania said...

b, did you steal s. well's favorite from the unpublished writings of Edna Pontellier (before she came to her final conclusions, of course)?
nai